Monday, February 29, 2016

Article Summaries

(Links for sources are in the title) 
Source 1:
  • The objective of this research paper was "To evaluate changes in quality of life, anxiety, and depression after cochlear implantation in adults" (Mo, Lindbaek, Harissa, 2005) 
  • The research question of this paper was do cochlear implants improve the individual's quality of life? 
  • The main Results of the paper were that, after the surgery, the cochlear implant recipients gained statistically significant improvements in their ability to communicate, as well as had a lessened feeling of isolation and being burdened, and had better relations with friends. 
  • The main conclusions of the paper were: the post-lingually deafened adults who had cochlear implants had a statistically significant improvement in their quality of life. Especially a reduction in depression and anxiety. 
  • The research method used in this paper was a questionnaire used by 29 patients who answered questions before and after their surgery in order to evaluate their changes related to quality of life. 
  • This source is relevant to my topic because it shows the results first had of patients who have gone through the surgery and what they experienced and experience with cochlear implants, relating to their quality of life. It is a relatively recent study that presents accurate data and firsthand results. Additionally, it provides the specific perspective of individuals deafened post-lingually, which is an important factor to consider for the change in their quality of life. This source directly relates to my topic. 
  • The objective of this paper was to evaluate the past 10 years of research that has examined the effect of cochlear implants on health related quality of life among three age groups of those who received the implants: children, adults, and the elderly.
  • The main results and conclusions were that despite the research that has gone into this subject, there is still no reliable pre-surgical predictor of the post-surgical lives for the cochlear implant recipients. All three groups have varying results which proves that no one can pin point one characteristic for each group. Therefore, professionals should provide thorough information and support to their clients who may receive cochlear implants. Additionally, the authors concluded that there were very little studies that took a qualitative or holistic approach at looking at the lives of those with the implants. 
  • The research methods used in this paper were reviewing and synthesizing the past 10 years of research on the topic. 
  • This source is relevant to my topic because it shows: provides a very holistic view of the topic and data that past studies have produced. It evaluates three important groups of individuals who may get the implant, giving me a lot of viable information for my review. 
Source 3:
  • The objectives/research questions of this paper were to evaluate the health-related quality of life of children with cochlear implants. 
  • The main results and conclusions were that the youngest group of children reported/scored higher in the health-related quality of life compared to the older group of children. Results also showed that the older were more precise in answering and therefore further development of self-report instruments must be created. 
  • The research methods used in this paper were questionnaires, interviews, and self-reports. 
  • This source is relevant to my topic because it shows a more specific, direct look at the quality of life for children, one of the three important, relevant categories, with cochlear implantations. 


Source 4:
  • The objective/research question of this paper was to evaluate the health-related quality of life in late-implanted pre-lingually deafened adults 
  • The main results and conclusions were that the quality of life increased for the postoperative adults and that the quality of life did not seem to have a significant correlation with speech perception scores. 
  • The research methods used in this paper were three different questionnaires for the patients. 
  • This source is relevant to my topic because it shows a deeper look at another important category for cochlear implants: adults. It thoroughly discusses the topic and discusses the quality of life throughout the entire paper. 
Source 5:

  • The objectives/research questions of this paper were to see if those over 60 who receive implantations improve their quality of life. 
  • The main results and conclusions were that there was improved hearing and quality of life for the recipients, but there are technological limitations for the older population that should be evaluated. 
  • The research methods used in this paper was reviewing recordings of implant users over the age of 60 years. 
  • This source is relevant to my topic because it shows the last important age category for cochlear implant recipients: the elderly. The findings are thorough and gives credible evidence for my paper. 

Source 6: 

  • The objectives/research questions of this paper were to evaluate the psychological well-being of patients with cochlear implants. 
  • The main results and conclusions were that the onset or duration of deafness did not seem to effect the quality of life for the individuals who got cochlear implants. 
  • The research methods used in this paper was studying/assessing 96 individuals (varying ages) with cochlear implants. 
  • This source is relevant to my topic because it shows a somewhat different side to the discussion of quality of life, by looking at the surrounding social environment and age of the individuals, comparing and contrasting them. It relates to my topic as it discusses in great details the psychological quality of life for those who get cochlear implants. 


Wednesday, February 24, 2016

Assignment 2 Proposal

Topic Proposal: Do Cochlear implants improve the quality of life? 
"A cochlear implant is an electronic medical device that replaces the function of the damaged inner ear. Unlike hearing aids, which make sounds louder, cochlear implants do the work of damaged parts of the inner ear (cochlea) to provide sound signals to the brain" (Source).
Therefore, those who consider getting cochlear implants having hearing loss in varying degrees.
This is a controversial subject because of the wide range of patients and results for who get cochlear implants. Some celebrate the new way of life why others regret it or disapprove of it. For example, the Deaf community often disapproves of those who decide to "improve" their hearing because they believe there is nothing that should be considered needing improvement.
However, does it improve your hearing, quality of life, both physiologically and psychologically?
Is the change worth it?
That is why I'm writing on this topic.

Sources:
http://www.uio.no/studier/emner/uv/isp/SPED4100/h13/dokumenter/cochlear-implants-and-quality-of-life.pdf
http://www.lifeprint.com/asl101/topics/cochlear-implants-3.htm
http://www.bbc.com/news/magazine-17039270
http://archotol.jamanetwork.com/article.aspx?articleid=622706
http://cirrie.buffalo.edu/encyclopedia/en/article/293/

Quote Analysis

I wrote an essay for my most recent history class, discussing the state Japan was in during and after World War II. I supported my main points by synthesizing sources and using quotations from various historians to give a thorough understanding of history in Japan at that time.

First quotation:
“they ruled as Mandarins themselves” (Dower 560).

I integrated this quote by putting it at the end of a sentence that was describing how Americans ruled Japan. It was placed specifically to end the sentence. It was not directly introduced, but instead went along with the topic of the paper, which was introduced earlier. Therefore, the audience understood the context of the quote without my introducing it by a specific name. 

Second quotation: 
I integrated and explained the quote by first discussing my point on how the Japanese were able to rebuild and reinvent their lives. I discuss this for a few sentences and then I add the quote after the summary for support. I introduced it only briefly by saying who it was written by before blending the quote into the end of my sentence. Blending the quote also made it easier for me to relate it back to my text, which supported the ideas discussed in the quote. The rest of the paragraph looks at specific cases of how the Japanese changed their lives, connecting back to my words as well as the author's.  


It blended with the text in order to give a smooth transition and a strong image to how the Americans acted instead of just describing it. This quote is certainly short, but evokes a specific reaction to support my point: the Americans did not rule Japan well. I expand on the ideas described in the quote after it, giving specific examples that tie in with the point of my words as well as the author's. 

“testimony to human resilience that the great majority of Japanese transcended exhaustion and despair to refashion their lives in diverse and often imaginative ways” (120). 



Tuesday, February 23, 2016

Peer Reviews and Conference

I found the peer reviews to be very helpful for revising my informational report. Almost all of the points for each commenter gave me a new area to look at and revise, providing me with a holistic revision of my paper. The commenters were also my age which gave me a good perspective on how my paper was translated by my peers and what they would or wouldn't understand. I would recommend that if a commenter suggests the addition of something in a specific area, they provide multiple avenues in order that if their suggestion does not fit in the first suggestion, the writer has the ability to put it somewhere else, improving the paper. Also, I would recommend cutting down on questions in the comments, because it can become overwhelming and confusing. 

The conferences were also very helpful as they gave me a thorough look at my paper's structure, organization, and strength of writing. The conference helped me visualize what I needed to change, so I could connect them back to the writing. The conference also gave me a thorough explanation and for each area I needed to fix, which helped me broaden my learning abilities. The only thing I would suggest is maybe giving a stricter time limit for the conferences so they don't run over other conferences. 

Thursday, February 11, 2016

First Draft of Informational Report


To Communicate for Those Who Cannot:
Writing in Speech-Language Pathology
by Victoria Shihadah 




Writing in Speech-Language Pathology
What if you could not hear or speak or communicate at all? One young boy who lost many of his language abilities after experiencing a seizure battled with this, and Elizabeth Delsandro wanted to help him. As she helped him through therapy in high school, Delsandro discovered her passion for Speech-Language Pathology (SLP), a profession committed to working “to prevent, assess, diagnose, and treat speech, language, social communication, cognitive-communication, and swallowing disorders in children and adults” (ASHA[1] 2016). As the years progressed, Delsandro went to undergraduate and graduate school, and eventually was certified as an SLP in 1992. As she settled into her new job, she discovered that writing was a significant part of her profession, in which one has to be a "very keen observer of human behavior, and be able to communicate that in writing" (2016).
I conducted an interview with Delsandro, asking a range of questions related to writing in her field. The role of this report is to inform high school students on the four main types of writing that speech pathologists use: observational writing about clients, research papers, emailing and blogging, and grant proposals. This discussion will be based on both academic and non-academic sources, as well as the words of Delsandro herself.
Observational Writing on Clients
Observational writing is at the foundation of Speech Pathology writing. Every single day SLPs interact with their clients, taking notes on the client’s behavior, progress, and overall abilities. Observational is considered academic writing, and can serve two distinct purposes: to inform the client, or to inform professional agencies.
The client and his or her family is the SLP’s highest priority, and they are in constant communication. The SLP provides notes and summaries that enable the client to participate in the treatment by staying updated on the caseworker’s observations, feedback, and plans for the future. The content of these observational reports is unique to each case, but the style is always concise, short, and objective, using non-technical language that the client can understand. For example, in the report titled “Speech/Language Evaluation Report,” the SLP is sure to give easy to understand instructions for the client and client’s family: “Provide opportunities for the child to comment by creating situations where she requests one item and you give her another while leaving time for her to comment” (Gorska, 2013). Furthermore, in the interview with Delsandro explains the length of these reports as “a paragraph per client” (2016). However, these reports become longer when addressed to a professional counterpart instead of a client.
Observational reports for professional agencies are written for insurance companies, schools, and other authorities working closely with the case. One good example is an online report titled “Speech Language Evaluation Report” (2014) on a client named Olivia Brown, which informs insurance companies and other related authorities of the nature of this young girl’s language impairment and recommended course of action. The report clearly addresses its purpose when it states at the beginning that it was “proposed in order to determine if Olivia meets the Tennessee Department of Education eligibility standards as language impaired” (Chatty, 2014). Not only does the report need to clearly address clients, but also it needs to clearly present the content.
Because the authorities need to make an informed decision about treatment, observational reports contain detailed information about the client, including what she said and how she acted, for example, “Olivia was friendly, and she exhibited a good sense of humor” (Chatty, 2014). The report is most often written with a thorough yet brief history of the client’s condition, an evaluation of the client in the present, other important observations, and a proposal for future plans. This writing involves “telling a story about the client,” according to Delsandro. (2016). The style and structure are somewhat different from the clients’ observational notes, as these reports tend to be lengthier, but still concise, clear, and objective. Because these reports can be quite long, headings and definitions are very important to lead the audience. For example, the for Olivia Brown provides clear points using signposts throughout: "III. INTERVENTION GOALS AND PROGRESS,” “IV IMPRESSIONS,” and “V RECOMENDATIONS” (Chatty, 2014) SLPs often also use visualization methods to build their case. For example, in the Language Evaluation Report, the SLP provides this graph:
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Figure 1 (Chatty, 2016)
Although these observational reports are an invaluable part of an SLP’s day to day writing and communicating to either their client or authorities connected to the case, there are other extremely valuable pieces of writing an SLP must do, for example, writing on research.
Research Papers
            Conducting research in speech pathology is considered a valuable addition to the job, and must be followed up with competent writing about the findings. The role of the research paper is to inform the audience about a specific project, experiment, or undertaking, related to SLP, prompting discussion between professionals on the topic. These academic sources have an audience that is generally limited to professional SLPs with a specific interest in the area being researched. The content of these papers may include results, findings, theories, or predictions. For example, the research paper titled “The Effects of Parental Training on Early Intervention in Speech Language Pathology” (2011) clearly shows what content the audience can expect. Without proper writing, however, SLPs cannot communicate their research effectively.
            The style of these lengthy research papers must be very formal, objective, clear, and concise. These papers are often the result of years of research with many specific points to discuss. The writing tends to have a very technical, professional style because the audience is made up of only SLPs. For example, in the previously mentioned research paper, author Lindsey Tabor uses very professional, exact language: “[the researchers] evaluated the efficacy of a six-month course of responsivity education/pre-linguistic milieu teaching (RE/PMT) for children with developmental delay” (2011). Additionally, the structure of these pieces must be very organized, like the observational reports, as they too are building a case for their audience. Each research paper begins with an abstract that summarizes it, and contains multiple sections, divided up using headings and subheadings. These papers are always very technical, including page numbers, footnotes, quotations, and visual aids, such as graphs and charts as shown previously. Research papers are an invaluable way for SLPs to share information with other professionals in their field. However, there is a casual way SLPs share their information: blog posts and emails.
Personal Blog Posts and Emails
            SLPs do not always need a formal platform for sharing findings or observations, even tips. Blogging and emailing provides them with a non-academic outlet or means to share ideas and thoughts without pages of research or evidence. The purpose of this category is to inform the audience on simpler or shorter subjects. The audience may be graduate students, clinicians, or professors. Some may be only interested in a specific area you are studying as an SLP, while another may just be curious how you conduct your visits day to day, and others are just colleagues you email daily. For example, in the online blog post titled “Speech Sound S. How to Stimulate the s/s Sound,” (2016) it is obvious that this is written for an audience of practicing SLPs who need to stimulate a specific sound. The online platform is an objective and informative place for SLPs to learn and share their own methods. Some blogs, like the one mentioned above, remain professional, while others become more subjective, yet still informative. For example another blog post titled “Making Worksheets Fun and Functional,” (2016) is written to inform any SLP interested in tips that might be applicable to their field. Blog posts are driven by personal interest rather than necessity. Emails are written for convenience, informing colleagues of bits of information or facts they should be aware of. Although this category can become casual, style and structure still remains an important aspect of the writing.
Style and structure for blog posts and emails vary, depending on the subject and audience. However, because SLPs are busy and know their colleagues are busy too, they are sure to convey their message efficiently. Additionally, they often remain professional and clear, giving the audience main points and evidence.  Although we have discussed three important categories for writing as an SLP, there is one last valuable category: grant proposals.
Grant Proposals
            The last, and very unique, writing category for SLPs is grant proposals. These are created when an SLP seeks to be funded by organizations or individuals for a specific purpose, such as research or requesting items needed for a clinic. For example, the proposal titled “Speech & Hearing Clinic: iPads, Charging/Syncing Cart for Speech/Language Therapy,” (2013) aims to convince the organization to grant funds for these items. The audience for this writing is specific, often with specific requirements for the proposal. The SLP must understand and meet these requirements. For example, the proposal mentioned above provides concise information that the organization requires: “As students, it is critical that devices such as iPads are available in our clinic so we can learn to use them with maximum effectiveness” (Nevdahl, 2013). The purpose of this type of writing is not just to inform, but also to persuade, impacting the style of writing.
The SLP must remember that their grant proposal audiences are important people who are looking for professional, concise, thorough writing, rather than just technical rhetoric. Delsandro explained it well when she said, "Writing a grant is like following a formula” (2016). Each grant is unique and although the overarching purpose—to persuade—never changes, the theme and style of the piece does. It is also important to note that these proposals are considered non-academic because the SLP writing it has a clear bias, although they maintain a professional manner in the writing. An affirmative answer to a grant proposal can be a milestone in the SLP’s career, and can change the lives of their clients.  
Conclusion
This report aimed to inform high school students of the four main purposes of writing for a speech pathologist: observational writing on clients, research papers, emailing and blogging, and proposals for grants. As is clear from Delsandro’s story, passion is the first step in pursuing a career like SLP. However, understanding how to communicate effectively through writing is also crucial. Whether it is through having a clear purpose, understanding the audience, or writing in an effective manner, words undoubtedly have power and impact. Delsandro emphasizes that practicing and learning foundational writing skills are key to being a good writer in the field, because “Ultimately, we have to write about what we do, and you have to be an effective writer” (2016).

References
Chatty M. (2014). Language Evaluation Report (Rep.).

Gorska, A. (2013). SPEECH/LANGUAGE EVALUATION REPORT (Rep.).

Nevdahl, M. (2013). Speech & Hearing Clinic: IPads, Charging/Syncing Cart for
Speech/Language Therapy (Rep.).


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[1]American Speech-Language Hearing Association